Written and Produced
by Andy Bradbury
(author of "Develop Your NLP Skills", etc.)
Reviews: Part 33
The Title
Name(s) of the Author(s)
Publisher and ISBN Number [this will be for the paperback version except where the number ends with (Hb)]
NLP
Carolyn Boyes
Collins ISBN 0-00-721655-6
(NB: "Collins" is, as far as I can make out, actually HarperCollinsCanada)
I would have loved to give this book a high rating. But in all honesty I can't. And here's why.
Parts of this book are genuinely equal in quality to some of the books I've already given high ratings on this site. Unfortunately, however, it is an obvious candidate for the label "curate's egg". That is to say, along with the good there is far too much that is ambiguous, misleading or just plain inaccurate.
For example, the "chapter" on Beliefs (pages 52-55) makes a lot of sense, until you get to the final section: Changing your beliefs. At this point the book refers to beliefs as though they were totally rational, so that we are told that all we need to do to change a belief is look at the facts!
I don't know how many clients the author has tried this on, if any, but I'm surprised she hasn't noticed by now that if you tell someone (even yourself) that their belief on some subject is wrong they seldom if ever turn round and thank you for correcting their mistake.
On the contrary, this approach seems like a sure fire way of evoking resistance, since beliefs tend to be based primarily of emotions rather than reason, which usually only comes in a poor second when we are asked to justify a belief.
Or take the chapter Choosing States (pages 46-47) which is good in parts, yet in the section on Interview states offers a technique for creating an appropriate state which looks vaguely like the Circle of Excellence technique, but makes no mention of anchoring the resulting state in any way!
More worrying, though, are the downright innacuracies. I have no idea of what lies behind them, but it seemed, to me, that someone had culled information from various books on NLP without really understanding what they were reading. Here are a few examples:
I don't know how true this is, but I suspect that the bottom line for all of this ambiguity is that the book has been put together on the basis of reading a few books on the subject rather than direct experience. Because I note that Ms Boyes, whose NLP qualifications are not readily apparent, has written other books for Collins, including,in the same Need to know? series, one on body language, and one entitled Cosmic Ordering in 7 Easy Steps. Cosmic ordering being a system where you write down what you want and order the Universe to give it to you! So, NLP expert, or jobbing author? My inclination is to go for the latter.
To be blunt, although the book is "good in parts", newcomers to NLP deserve something a lot better than this as an introduction to the subject. And there are several books already on the market which undertake that task far more effectively.
Recommendation: Ignore this book and help save a tree.
Click here for a list of introductory books on NLP, ordered by speciality, if any.
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Six Blind Elephants Volume 1
Steve Andreas
Real People Press ISBN 0-911226-41-9
If size alone was the measure of whether a book was worth its cover price then at 289 pages, plus a four page Introduction, one smallish Appendix, and an Index, this book would rate at least average.
Unfortunately, size alone is not an adequate justification in a book, unless you're planning to use it to prop up an uneven table leg, or as a doorstop. And in my opinion that makes this book overpriced by maybe 50%. And oversized by about the same amount
How do I come to that conclusion? Very easily.
Each of the 13 chapters (which average out at just over 22 pages), has a summary, and thge summaries are seldom if ever longer than two pages, and mostly shorter than that.
And yet -
Those summaries are well-written, useful, genuine summaries such that, in my opinion, a reader could gain a perfectly adequate understanding of the gist of the book even if they read nothing but the summaries. In other words, if the quality was maintained, the summary pages could be expanded by, say, 600-700 per cent and you'd still have a much shorter book than is actually the case. And probably one which would appeal to a wider audience.
The problem, I suspect, is that the author is his own publisher, and by the look of what we have in this first volume, that also means that he is his own editor.
In theory that should actually be a benefit, because - in my opinion - it was the books based on Bandler and Grinder seminars, transcribed and edited by Steve and Connirae Andreas (such as Frogs into Princes, TRANCEformations, etc.) which actually facilitated NLP's development from being a small scale group activity based in Santa Cruz to an international phenomenon.
It seems evident, however, that being able to expertly edit other people's work does not necessarily mean that one can bring a similar level of rigor to the editing of one's own work. On the contrary, this book, like Steve's previous work, Transform Your Self, is packed with material which simply doesn't need to be there.
Some of it is plain extraneous, some of it is personal opinion posing as fact, and some of it seemed, to me, to be just plain daft - not forgetting the characteristic little rant or two about religion. Here are some brief examples - I leave it to you to decide whether my comments are justified:
"A friend of mine has a dog which was mistreated by a man when it was a puppy, and it is able to distinguish very clearly between men and women. ... Since we can easily distinguish between men and women, this may seem like an easy distinction to make, but most of us find it's not easy to distinguish between a male and a female dog at a small distance."
(page 28)
And ...? Going on my own experience of observing dogs and women, there do seem to be rather more external, and easily observable, clues which enable us to distinguish between a man and a woman than there are to signal that a dog is male or female.
"If you ask someone to think of all the emotional feelings they have ever experienced, both named and unnamed - anger, sadness, guilt ... etc., and all the nuances of these - most people will start struggling at 30, and be totally exhausted at about 75. (If you're skeptical, try it.) Most peoplemake far fewer distinctions than this, and some people have only three: "good," "bad" and "OK." Compare that with six million for colour alone in the visual modality."Pardon? "good," "bad" and "OK" are emotional feelings like "anger," "sadness," etc.? Not in any book I've so far read on the subject they aren't (although "OK" might be borderline in certain contexts).
(page 35)
More to the point, the author seems tobe unaware that both emotions and colours are analogue, NOT digital. That is to say, we can see innumerable "colours" simultaneously, but we do not discriminate between them to the degree that the book implies. Indeed, how many are distinct colours, and how many are shades, tints, etc. of distinct colours? And for how many of these "colours" do we have widely recognised names?
If you play with the colour settings on a computer you will quickly find that you can vary the hue, sat and lum values for any given colour to a certain extent without being able to discern any difference at all. We may be able to physically observe x million "colours," but that is nothing like the same as saying that we can genuinely discriminate between them?
By the same token, pick any pair of emotions you like and it is possible to imagine a continuous spectrum of incredibly minute differences, even though you aren't consciously able to distinguish between them. The fact that we are seldom if ever aware of the most delicate nuances of our emotions, and don't have a name for each tiny variation doesn't mean they aren't there, as this passage seems to suggest.
"The natural, physical world isn't fair or unfair, it just is."
(page 49)
So if you're dumb enough to believe any concept like "As ye sow, so shall ye reap," Karma, "What goes around, comes around" and so on then snap out of it. This omniscient (all-knowing) book is right and you're wrong.
And if you think that's an opinion posing as a fact, of course you're wrong again.
"Curiously, even those who follow the values set forth in religious texts would not use those texts as a guide for how to build a television set or an assault rifle. Those who fight in religious wars are quite willing to use the science embodied in jet planes, radar, and other weaponry to defeat their 'infidel' enemies [who can he mean?] yet they are not willing to use the methods of science to examine the basis for their own beliefs and values."
(page 200)
Perhaps if there were any religious texts that actually included instructions on how to build a TV or an assault rifle, things might be different. Who knows?
"When searching for a shirt, it usually makes sense to first select only those that are the appropriate size, and then select for the color, style etc. that you prefer."
Say what?
You might be wondering in what sense is the word "usually" being used here.
On further enquiry it turns out that the author is actually thinking of the specific store where he buys HIS shirts, where the garments are all hung out on rails. So if you happen to buy your own shirts in stores where they are arranged by style and packaged up in cellophane or plastic bags then I'm guessing this would certainly NOT be your own "usual" procedure, and this sentence is yet another very personal opinion posing as a fact? And again, not very useful opinion?
My major criticism of the book, however, is the subtitle: "Fundamental Principles pf Scope and Category".
I wholly agree that the terms are used in a meaningful way - but to what purpose?
I could find very little in this book that hasn't appeared in print many times before. The only difference, as far as I could see, was that the words "scope" and "category" instead of the words other authors have used.
Moreover we are promised early on that: "If the first few chapters sometimes seem a bit plodding and irrelevant to understanding life's problems, a little patiernce will be rewarded with a multitude of very useful practical applications. For a quick taste of these, you can look ahead to chapters 12 and 13 on recategorization, or try the Aggregate Categorical Scope Perspective Exercise on page 175." (page x)
Now chaper 12 doesn't start until page 245, only 44 pages from the end of the main text. And as I manfully slogged through the intervening pages I have to say it seemed like a hell of a lot more than "a little patience" was required to get through the positively tedious and repetitive contents of those "first few chapters", with very little reward of any description at the end.
So why do I need to be thinking about scopes and categories at all? After reading this book I have absolutely no idea. And to show you why I want to go back, for a moment, to that incredibly cumbersomely-named Aggregate Categorical Scope Perspective exercise on page 175 that was recommended as a hot item.
In step 2 of the exercise - Relevant scopes - we are instructed to, "Think of six important scopes that have a bearing on [the decision you need to make in the near future]". For instance, the likely consequences ..." (page 175).
Maybe it's just me, but I would personally have written that text as, "Think of six important factors that have a bearing ..." That alternative wording would have had, as far as I can tell, exactly the same meaning, and in language which I suspect is far more widely understood that talk of scopes and categories.
All the way through this book I had the feeling (based, perhaps, on the early promise quoted above) that it was going to advance my understanding to a significant extent. When I'd finished it all I felt was that most of what I had read was pretty much a complete waste of time.
There is, to be sure, one chapter on logical levels, which the author insists on calling "Categories of Categories" (Chapter 5) which provides a fairly clear explanation of what genuine "logical types" and "logical levels" are, and how the concepts can be usefully applied in NLP. At the same time, from an academic perspective, the author demolishes the pseudo-logical levels nonsense that has been circulating in NLP circles for some years courtesy of messrs. Dilts and Hall, respectively. This chapter only accounts for approximately 10 per cent of the book's length (including the introduction), and interesting though it is, in my opinion it doesn't warrant paying the price of the entire book unless that happens to be a subject that you find particularly interesting.
Overall, this read, to me, like the kind of book that a particular kind of person praises for no better reason than that it seems so obtuse. The logic being, it seems, that if the reader, who rates his own intellectual prowess pretty highly, can't understand the book then it must be very profound indeed. (The words "clothes," "new" and "emperor" come to mind.)
If I could read the author's mind, everything on this book might make perfect sense. Unfortunately, however, I do not have access to the author's brain - only the excerpts of his thinking which appear on the pages of this book - and a few questions I've been able to ask him online. Fom that limited perspective I give this a one star rating, and even that is based entirely on the contents of Chapter 5: *.
Please note: The above comments ONLY apply to Six Blind Elephants Vol. 1. A separate review will be presented for Volume 2, and at the moment I have no idea whether the second volume will be better, worse or about the same.
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Brilliant NLP
David Molden and Pat Hutchinson
Prentice Hall Business ISBN 0-273-70789-2
Just to get any possible misunderstanding out of the way, the appearance of the word "brilliant" in the title of this book is a link into a series of business books issued under the slogan: "Don't be Good. Be Brilliant with ..." Which is a bit of a shame, because this particular book is unlikely to help the reader become brilliant with anything, let alone "Brilliant with NLP."
Anyway, to the book itself.
Like so many of the books I've reviewed lately there's good news and bad news; so let's start with the good news.
The good news is that the book is well laid out, well written and therefore very easy to read. It also shows some degree of creativity often absent from recent introductions to NLP, such as the inclusion of a section on the Satir Categories including "leveller." A very welcome and useful variation.
(I realise that the Satir categories aren't usually included in core NLP, but Satir was certainly one of the core influences in the development of NLP, and her use of the categories must surely have been witnessed, many times by both Bandler and Grinder and therefore presumably influenced their thinking to a significant extent?)
Unfortunately, that is the end of the good news. And there's more bad news than there is good news.
Firstly, the cover price of £12.99 for a book of only 113 pages (and no references, bibliography or index) is, in my opinion, way over the top. Even if the book delivered on its promise I think it would be hard to justify a price of more than £8.99-£9.99.
Of course I realize that both the authors and the publisher no doubt believe that the book does give a good value for money, but I personally found no justification for such an opinion. Which brings us to the other reasons why I've given the book such a low rating.
This is by no means an exhaustive list of the book's shortcomings, but it is enough, I think, to show that the book is completely "unfit for purpose". The point is not that the book is flawed in every respect, because it isn't. But it is intended as an introductory text, yet if the reader is to avoid the numerous errors they would need to already possess a good working knowledge of NLP. And if they already had that knowledge, why would they need this book?
Recommendation: Avoid this book and save a tree.
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Andy Bradbury can be contacted at: bradburyac@hotmail.com